Tuesday, November 30, 2010

One Last Thing, Part II

*a continuation of One Last Thing, Part I

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Seven Uzbek mobsters aim their handguns - a variety of weapons ranging from American M1911s to Czech CZ75s - at Cray and Drew. Cray's HK G36 and Drew's HK416 return the favor. The two Americans know that they might die here, in this dusty excuse for a warehouse in Denau, but it's gonna be a fun time if they do.

Cray tries very hard not to laugh. The situation has all the setup of a bad joke, though Mexican standoffs in Uzbekistan aren't as unusual… read more @ Panoramic Mindscapes

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*Continued in One Last Thing, Part III

3 comments:

  1. I am enjoying the odd emotion mix up in this. It seems to be something you excel in, off-handed emotion in serious dilemma....
    I went back to reread the opening. Looking forward. -J

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  2. Okay, I'm hooked. They better find the kids though : )

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  3. I have to admit that I liked Part 1 better. I think it was the reparte between Cray and Drew. Though there is a bit of banter between them here, it doesn't carry as much of their personalities as that in Part 1.

    Anxious to see where you take this in the nexr installment.

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