Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Gods Playing Poker: Pinched with Four Aces

*Continued from Gods Playing Poker: A Friend in Need

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"Boyfriend's a no-go." Silver jumps in the driver's seat, smirking at his partner who's wolfing down some chocolate.

"You sure?" East isn't surprised, except by the joke written on the inside of the goo-bar wrapper. He just asks out of habit.

"Yeah, jack in."

East whips his PDP out from his jacket pocket and touches it to Silver's. Transmit lights turn green and East starts reading the… read more @ Panoramic Mindscapes

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*Continued in Gods Playing Poker: Stranger in Camp

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7 comments:

  1. Okay ... so why the dog drawings? Not even like Tom whipped them up ...

    email coming ...

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  2. still interesting, a bit hard to follow at times, probably go back and reread after its all done...

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  3. There's no digital distortion at all. Not a single fucking pixel. oooh . . so what are they then? Very dialoguey (is that a word) which probably makes it a little harder to read. But read aloud, sounds good. Glad you trademarked all those doohickeys TM

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  4. aha ... the TM is youse two being canney ... I thought it was some smart-arsed literary device ... never mind me, naif-is as naif-does.

    I'm gonna list 'em all when I come up for air myself ... list em all and try to work them out ...

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  5. This is an interesting take on the police procedural.

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  6. Ok, I admit. I totally farqed up. I read three and then one and then two. My god, I don't know that I could have done it more wrong. Well, maybe just a bit, BUT, it's good Tom. No, it's great, really. And about all I can think other than, tell me, tell me, is BOOK. And then, MOVIE. And then, Tom'll be a very rich man.

    xo
    erin
    (Oh, I'm going to take a break from my messing up and read the last two IN ORDER!!! in a couple days:)

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