Thursday, June 17, 2010

Window

He can see her, but he can barely hear her. Even with the listening device, the window doesn't allow sound through all that well. She's extraordinarily beautiful - to him, at least - and he'd be hard-pressed to dream of a woman more attractive.

They met in Cozumel, Mexico. She was traveling the world, fresh from secondary school. With no desire to immediately attend college, she packed her bags and left everything behind. He was a sophomore at the University of Nevada, Las Vegas, on Spring break. Not… read more @ Panoramic Mindscapes

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23 comments:

  1. Ohh! This was hitting a little too close to home till the end haha. Very well done!!

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  2. I knew it was web camera :). For once, I followed your twist.

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  3. Another good post about computer cameras. Very enjoyable. I think I have some black tape over mine, however. :)

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  4. i am confused on so many levels

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  5. Obsession as distraction works well - I'd prefer a continuation of that in the plot as opposed to the twist.

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  6. Hahahahaha!
    No really, just the right amount of creepiness and a lot of romance! And yeh, go get her.

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  7. Relationships in the 21st century - complicated!!!
    nicely done Jeff

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  8. I'm starting to feel like I've wandered into a house of mirrors. Or... wait! Maybe my computer screen has developed the ability to peer into the lives of others.

    Either way, I'm hooked. How will it all turn out? I'll stay tuned.

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  9. Sunk deeply into it, enjoying the story, wondering how it would end. Ended up confused, no doubt from my own lack of 'technology' experience.

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  10. Very nice twist. I never got it until the end. Great job!

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  11. Oh, this is one of my faves! Perfect for the prompt.

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  12. WOW... this is quite the read. Quite the write. I too think this is one of my favs so far. Bisous, Love and Light, Sender

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  13. Beautiful, sweet.

    But there ain't nothing like the real thing baby...

    Rene

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  14. Cool! I was surprised at the end. Didn't know a web cam was involved.

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  15. creepy!
    I don't get why contact info should be a problem in this day of facebook & email & blogs. technology makes it harder to ditch a stalker, not easier.

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  16. Oh, you have a way with words! A wonderful way with words ........... I could feel every one of them.

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