Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Arson

flick, switch
match strike
bursts of flame
quench
lustful thirsts
her room afire
beneath his passion
though wet
not water
lovers burn
to the ground

17 comments:

  1. Damn, I thought this was going to be a poem for pyros. Just more sex. :( :)

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  2. few words,
    larger pcture.
    in the heat of the moment.
    rel

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  3. Hot visuals - I love the luscious style of your poetry! ;)

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  4. Great piece - "lovers burn ... to the ground". It has such a fine feel to it : like words that were just meant to go together.

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  5. Jeff-You obviously know something about starting a fire ;).

    flick, switch
    match strike
    bursts of flame
    quench

    Hmmmm. Nice.

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  6. (humming) When your heart's on fire, smoke gets in your eyes . . .

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  7. golly. what's the inspiration for this. Not the Chargers, i hope.

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  8. This moves to the right conclusion..quite a good accomplishment!!

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  9. Have you seen Like Water for Chocolate?

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  10. http://adivashammer.com/archives/1124/comment-page-1#comment-8521

    union of thought and application
    motivation and action...
    finality!

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  11. oh my my ...all that from one match?

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  12. To hot to touch! I feel the heat rising off the page.

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