Ohh... I like it. :-)
Damn, I thought this was going to be a poem for pyros. Just more sex. :( :)
few words,larger pcture.in the heat of the moment.rel
hiss...feel the stream rising...
Hot visuals - I love the luscious style of your poetry! ;)
Great piece - "lovers burn ... to the ground". It has such a fine feel to it : like words that were just meant to go together.
Jeff-You obviously know something about starting a fire ;). flick, switchmatch strikebursts of flamequenchHmmmm. Nice.
(humming) When your heart's on fire, smoke gets in your eyes . . .
golly. what's the inspiration for this. Not the Chargers, i hope.
This moves to the right conclusion..quite a good accomplishment!!
Have you seen Like Water for Chocolate?
http://adivashammer.com/archives/1124/comment-page-1#comment-8521union of thought and application motivation and action...finality!
oh my my ...all that from one match?
To hot to touch! I feel the heat rising off the page.