deep stuff today jeff!
I can think of at least three or four ways to interpret this, which - of course - makes it a good little poem.
Thanks for this, Jeff!
wilt away slowly in her soiled handvisual...very nice.
Gorgeous. And deeper than it appears.
"With her gale in the wrong direction..." Intriguing!
You must love some of the comments.For me, the last thought sounds like a focus for a poem, or even a story. Dump the rest.